on the holidays

On the holiday my papa dropped me of at my mum's house. I loved It I went there to get Maori photos done. whit my sister Tara and my brother Lj when we were done we got lunch.
It was McDonald's after that we went to Kmart. And my mum got me Lj and Tara a tablet each.
And then we go home to my mum's friend's house. And played on our new Tablets well my mum made dinner. Then watch the movie before we been to bed. Well we was watching the movie
Lj and Tara wanted to sleep by me. But my mum wanted to sleep with me to.So we all slept on the same bed.




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next time I want to remember to add full stops.